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Post by lightfire on Jul 13, 2008 20:05:36 GMT -4
The lone rose rests on the wall In its shadow, from its climb. It has survived through thick and thin And long enough to grow tall.
Its petals’ vivid colors live in black and white; The dull drabness of the wall’s gray color And the shadows make the rose stand out The rose’s pink and red colors blossom with the dim light.
The years pass, and the rose lives on Through winters and summers it grows on the wall. The last spring comes; the bud opens late And when the summer passes, the lone rose is gone.
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+~*Okami*~+
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Post by +~*Okami*~+ on Jul 13, 2008 20:08:43 GMT -4
Wow... That was a sad ending . But it was really good- I liked how you used very descriptive words like vivid and drabness. So much better than just pretty or boring.
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Post by lightfire on Jul 13, 2008 20:36:39 GMT -4
Thanks!
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Post by silverstripe on Jul 14, 2008 12:10:33 GMT -4
yea - it´s really good - tell me, how did you make the background of this thing left where your name stands?
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Post by neon on Aug 19, 2008 10:15:55 GMT -4
That was good.. it reminded me of this book the Little Prince, where he has a talking rose that he takes care of.
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