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fire
Jul 13, 2008 20:08:47 GMT -4
Post by lightfire on Jul 13, 2008 20:08:47 GMT -4
fire in the style of E. E. Cummings
the crimson shade the scarlet( glaze) flames flicker freely
the dangerous guardian watches,waits Until it chars those of unfamiliar gaits The flames sizzle,the fire burns it hurts in its desire for flesh,it yearns
the yellow flashes white-hot( gashes) flames leap delightedly
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+~*Okami*~+
Newbie Author
Beyond good. Beyond Evil. Beyond your cutest imagination!
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fire
Jul 13, 2008 20:10:53 GMT -4
Post by +~*Okami*~+ on Jul 13, 2008 20:10:53 GMT -4
Wow- that was amazing. I love the style! I've never heard of the name of the style though (or the author, or whatever). You have a really gift with words, you know that? Especially at description.
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fire
Jul 13, 2008 20:38:44 GMT -4
Post by lightfire on Jul 13, 2008 20:38:44 GMT -4
Thanks again! He's famous for writing without grammar or without correct grammar and rarely using punctuation. Oh, sorry for poofing on you, my mom had to sew my new pointe shoes . . .
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