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Post by lightfire on May 27, 2008 17:23:12 GMT -4
I'll be writing this as I type it, so if you have any corrections, post it, please. My friend has nagged me about this for weeks, so I decided that if I made this site, I'd write her a boy-boy story. So it's completely HER idea!
You can comment, but please make your comments different from my text (like bold, different colors, or bigger size). Thank you!
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Post by lightfire on May 30, 2008 17:34:38 GMT -4
Note to readers: I'm going to be posting as I go along (which means I'm writing it in posts), so I'll post my day's work. It won't be in any specific sections or anything.
My work on Day 1
His heart thudded. How was he supposed to tell her? Sweet Melody, who never asked any awkward questions, who always cared about everything and everyone, who bore the brightest smile, who went on when everyone was hopeless? How was he supposed to explain to her this strange deformity that made him different?
He did not know.
And as the night passed, his mind whirled in explanations, each stupider or more hurtful than the last. When the end of their date came, he shakily rose to his feet and took several deep breaths.
"Are you okay?" Melody asked, concerned. "You don't look well."
"I'm fine, Melody," he managed. "But . . . there's something I want to tell you before the night is over. I've been trying to tell you all night."
"Will, you don't have to say a farewell speech because you don't feel anything for me. I understand."
"No," he mumbled, tears girlishly leaking from his eyes. "It's more important than that." He wished he didn't have to hurt her so much, but she deserved to know the truth.
"Melody," he whispered, "I can't explain it to you without hurting you. But . . . like many guys before me, I've discovered my true nature.
"I'm gay."
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Adalie Bates
Aspiring Author
[P:19]
You shouldn't risk it all until you are sure of what you have to lose.
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Post by Adalie Bates on May 31, 2008 13:47:39 GMT -4
Interesting story so far. I will read it as you add more.
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Post by silverstripe on Jun 11, 2008 3:00:29 GMT -4
I´m waiting for more ... ;D
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Post by lightfire on Jun 16, 2008 11:11:32 GMT -4
Sorry, Kiara. I just haven't gotten around to it yet. Okay, okay, I will. P.S. to Nin: JOIN ALREADY!!!! OTHERWISE I WON'T WRITE ANY MORE!!!!! My work on Day 2"Will, you really don't have to make up stories or anything--" "I'm not." He sounded frank and matter-of-fact, but inside, he felt sick and kind of disgusted with himself. Why wasn't he normal? "I can still be your friend, Will." OOC: Grrrr. I have to switch computers. I'll be right back.
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Post by ~*^$!@#()%&HONORE&%()#@!$^*~ ( on Jun 16, 2008 13:52:17 GMT -4
[glow=red,2,300]right more!!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D p.s. fjkroa stands for future j.k. rowling of america[/glow]
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neon
Newbie Author
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I *heart* Sonic
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Post by neon on Jul 2, 2008 13:24:30 GMT -4
I'm happy. But I'd be happier if YOU WROTE MORE!
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Post by silverstripe on Jul 3, 2008 12:27:09 GMT -4
Yea - please, please write more!!!!!
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neon
Newbie Author
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I *heart* Sonic
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Post by neon on Aug 19, 2008 10:11:39 GMT -4
I read what you said about starting over, and I think it’s for the best. But by the time this year is over, I want something to fangirl over!
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